On to the next project with bigger and better things! Cheers! that's not the kind of constructive criticism that I need.) Be it to say that you enjoyed it, want to give me some advice on how to better myself or just tell me I suck. I truly hope you enjoy this and leave a comment. Like I said this is my first foray into the making of visual novels. Where I could find the original authors, I asked them for permission.
Since I'm totally inept at true art like drawing and painting, and I don't want to destroy your eyes with the scrabbles that I can do, I used images found from different sources. It's basically my short waff/pwp story, edited for storytelling, with exciting visuals and music. I've been working on this little project for some time now.